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Firstly just a quick hello (been a while since i've been on) and secondly Just finished my new business card design. What does everyone think?
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10-18-2009, 11:17 AM
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Perhaps the numbers / colons could be aligned?
Co-ordinate the order of colours in the bars to the logo? No address always makes me suspicious. A few comments. Peter
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10-18-2009, 11:32 AM
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I was going to advise that you removed the fine detailed patterned background, as this would not have printed well, but it seems you have already done it...good call.
What size are these? They don't look like the standard 85mm x 55mm.
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You don't need capitalisation on every word in the description of what you do - it looks messy and is gramatically incorrect. And lose the colons after 'Tel' etc. They're not necessary as you've picked out the words in a different colour.
Other than that, it looks pretty good. Although it does make me think of a printer rather than a designer because of the CMYK thing. Also, what size is it? Looks a little bit long? |
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