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Old 09-22-2009, 08:34 PM   #11
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Hello,

I really like what you've done with it, and this sugesstion maybe way to much, though sometimes I find I have to push myself past the optimum to come back to it. It Helps to convince me i'm making the right decision if i'm not sure.

How about adding some texture, just a little bit in the corners on the pink piece. Maybe put a stone like texture, with the transprancy knocked down to around 20%, might be to much, might be a completely useless suggestion but I had fun thinking about it so Thanks lol
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Old 10-20-2009, 10:12 AM   #12
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I got the 'Statue of David' reference. I'd just lose the 'soundwaves' behind the type. I find them a bit fussy and jarring with the rest of the layout. And get the type properly centred horizontally and vertically on the circle - it's a bit off at the minute and it upsets the balance for me.

Of course, I could be wrong.
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Ty Sparkcreative,

I definately agree! This poster however, is now in my HDD oldspace now that I've started back at college after the summer.

Good advice though - I need to pay more attention to things like positioning and alignment.
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Old 11-09-2009, 09:23 PM   #14
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To be honest i didn't get it, I thought it had some sexual meaning to it. which it doesn't right?
If it has no call to action it would be considered brand awareness.

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To be honest i didn't get it, I thought it had some sexual meaning to it. which it doesn't right?
If it has no call to action it would be considered brand awareness.

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I would agree with spark. I got the whole 'classics/statue' thing but it was the way the sound waves were so sharp that didn't sit well.
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