Thread: Would like some advice/critique

how would you suggest i make it appear more proffesional but still incorporate the bear illustration ?

Hi,

I like the bear, but I think it would look better without the blue background. I like the black and white version best, and so I think that you could make the background less intrusive.

Maybe you could find a typeface that stands out a little more.

Hope this helpful

Excuse the previous message, I meant that I didn't like the colour of the bear,it would look better a more bear like colour, and that background should be less intrusive.


Sorry !!!!