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    Needs alot of work Kye but for saying that you are new to design then I can't knock it too much. Only thing I'd say is simplify, simplify, simplify, do you need 3 different typefaces on a business card?

    The colour could be improved as its abit 'dirty' yellow at the moment, could it be abit more curvy, friendly?

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    hi

    Hi,

    I like the logo as it's simple, but I think the cherry should be more prominent.

    I think that the colour is a little pale, would be better in a colour that catches the eye more, maybe something warm like red.

    I think that it would be better to use 2 typefaces.

    It has potential !

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