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    Jokey Banner Critque

    Hi, I made this for personal use only, just trying out a few ideas. This one is basically a jokey sort of thing, I need to add some form of illustration really.
    I don't know if people will get the joke but I tried to split up the text to show a conversational sort of idea.


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    I like it. Got it immediately. It's because you've used grey and black. Looking good. Maybe put the other speech in speech marks as well though.

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    The Jesus symbol itself I will be changing as it isn't mine, but I have something similar in mind.

    I'm glad people understand it, I didn't know how cryptic it was. But thanks

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    I like it, tickled me straight away. I think it's got the perfect attitude and hit the nail on the head!

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