Ok plz rate my web designs..

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bobchops

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Ok thanks for taking the time ...

these are my first goes...!


Im just trying to make something good enough really.


Any suggestions much apreciated..!


Im actually surprised how good i am at this graphics crap.. for my first go's...


lol im a natural!
 
Without sounding rude I would hire a designer to put this together for you, they look pretty poor at the moment.

Hey can you keep ego posts away from my thread plz. Im trying to get a job done here.. Im not here to satisfy your ego.

please keep responces to constructive critism.

Not this I have a bigger Nob Bs.. Keep that for play ground please. Maybe if you were not such pathetic un manly feminized men.. you would not be trying to prove yourself by ego masturbation at any given oppertunity.
 
Hey can you keep ego posts away from my thread plz. Im trying to get a job done here.. Im not here to satisfy your ego.

please keep responces to constructive critism.

Not this I have a bigger Nob Bs.. Keep that for play ground please. Maybe if you were not such pathetic un manly feminized men.. you would not be trying to prove yourself by ego masturbation at any given oppertunity.

We've been through this once before and the thread got closed, why should people give you feedback when you're a dick about it.

As for a critique and some help for you...the designs are awful, they don't make any sense, the layout is bizarre, your type is poor, the random circles are just weird and there's no consistency.

When we say get a designer, it's not to stroke our ego, it's because you need one.
 
Bob, you're looking for constructive criticism. If you want it, take it. If you don't want it then don't abuse everyone here who's just trying to help.
You won't win any friends by responding to helpful criticism by abusing them.

Your website designs are very poor. That's the truth. If you want everyone to tell you what's wrong with them, then that's a very big job indeed. Boss's comment is completely fair as it would take a whole redesign to improve these sites.

Perhaps if you ask for advice on a specific element, then we can help. I won't be responding to any more of your posts until I feel that I won't get shot down in flames.
 
Well,... based on the above I think you're a sure thing to win a yellow pencil. :icon_clapping:
 
I really love it. The layout is great. The typography is well laid out. The coloured dots give it a nice splash of colour. Overall top job well done. I think yoi should go ahead and put this site up live.
 
I really love it. The layout is great. The typography is well laid out. The coloured dots give it a nice splash of colour. Overall top job well done. I think yoi should go ahead and put this site up live.

I think it should be entered for an award personally.
 
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